Fly, be free!
The completed first part of the next part of "The Other Girl" has been posted here and to Twisting the Hellmouth.
Although it isn't everything I could wish for... it does further the story (I'm sure it'll end up being revised at some point before the entire story is finished.).
Now on to the hard part -- the visit to the Burrow. Hopefully I'll have that finished/coherent by next weekend...
One of my concerns here is character voice. I have a whole scene with Hermione, Ron, Harry, Percy, and Molly and Arthur Weasley at the Burrow (talking about Buffy and Ginny) and I'm not sure if it really works as a good depiction of the way such a conversation would go.
Of course, part of that is because this is something not likely to ever happen in canon. The Harry Potter stories will end long before such a thing were possible. (And that's an issue with this entire story. I'm trying to depict people 5-10 years AFTER their story ends while still being true to how they grew up. WIthout going to far off into OOC (Out-of-Character) land.)
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