Several people have pointed out errors in the KP fic I've been posting to Twisting the Hellmouth and fanfiction.net.
So far... the following errors escaped into the "wild" (And have since been fixed) --
Prologue :
Changed one "glue" to "glued" (and added "while trying to avoid inhaling too much dust" to clarify something.)
Chapter 1:
Found "where" when it should have been "were"' (twice),
Had "official" when it should have been "officially"
Chapter 2:
Replaced "keene" with "keen"
Replaced one "quite" with "quiet"
Added "wearing" to "ear plugs"
And in other news... removed a slayer from Chapter 4 and changed all references to another of the slayers with Kim at the Hellmouth. (It was a continuity issue.)
I'm sure there are more... but hopefully I'll catch them all next time before posting the chapters anywhere. Really.
7:39:16 PM 
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