Not quite sure what is wrong with it...
Too much exposition? Should Buffy be saying so much when she brings Jenny up to speed on what happened and why she was brought back (from the dead) in part 2 of "Gypsy Tales" ???
I didn't want her to say nothing but over a thousand words worth of stuff to explain it all?
Hmmm... is that a bit too much? Too much summarizing?
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