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China Blonde - Revisions

Things that need to be changed

Note: I'm always reluctant to revise things once I've posted them. But I'm not perfect so I do occasionally miss things. And they need to be fixed eventually. This is the Revisions Page for this story China Blonde

To Do
  • In Part I - Why is Lara in this tomb?

    Proposed Fix: Hillary asked her to check it out while she was already in the neighbourhood since the valley is flooding. And she'll never have another chance.

  • In Part II - It isn't clear that Buffy is the first person to go into the anteroom.

    Planned fix: Not sure yet

  • Where did the demon that Buffy fights in Part II come from? Why didn't they see it before it attacked her?

    Planned Fix:No idea yet.

  • Lara doesn't have much to do in Part III even though the story is about her. - is she really there?

    Proposed fix: Have her join Buffy & Co. when they go into the temple to get info on their task. One of those "prove you are worthy" test/fight scenes maybe?

  • The fight in part IV is almost non-existent.

    Proposed fix: Flesh out the fight scene.

Done
  • None so far

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