New drafft I got the inspiration for this one Thursday while sitting behind someone in class, and with a little time between classes I started jotting it down in my notebook. Definitely a little on the rough side yet. It's a poem about the physical, not necessariliy in an erotic sense though one could interpret it that way. It's more to do with the wonder that strikes me about the human body. I don't see that many people up close, I don't see many people period. I'm much more comfortable dealing with minds, and I have to remind myself that, in that sophisticated network of the human body is a mind up there driving and pulling the levers.
Hope you like it, I always like to hear suggestions. <g>
Body Epistle
Pinch me, I don't believe I'm awake
You're real flesh your lungs breathe real air, I don't believe in old wive's tales I don't believe I'm in my fingers, when they press down the warm skin on your real shoulders then land upon the edges of your tender skeleton.
The lines on my claws are not as sharp when your real face is between them. They pirouette and sing and crack with the friction of the heat of a warm body like two epdiermic torches that put light and heat under the scarves you keep against the drfiting snow of our isolated winter.
There's a lot more of your sixty seven inches in the room than in the photographs I've seen of you, sixty seven more inches of a natural elixir to unclog my head and untie the knots in my throat, and with my tongue I'll taste the salt of your mind.
1:20:56 AM
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